| Title: | Nikki : On Bed | Image
Size: | 183KB |
| Date: | 01:05:2001 | Dimensions: |
500 x 689 pixels |
| Materials: | Pencil & Photoshop 5.5 | Comments: |
019 |
| Description: | I was very pleased with this at the time as I could see both my line art and colour work was improving. As with the first Nikki illustration, I went for bright, vibrant colours, which I’ve always been a fan of. An alternative colour version of this picture doubled up as the gift for the first Nikki fan art contest held in May 2001. | ||
The Insane Reader writes: |
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Oh. A television. Duh, I'm so stupid. Well, I don't watch the TV very much anyway. | |
Catherine writes: |
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I think the big black thing is a Television, because of the light emitting from it, and the glazed stare.  I think the picture is really good though...*nod*
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The Insane Reader writes: |
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Jakian is entitled to his own opinions. And now that I turn my head and look at the image diagonally, the top of Nikki's head is kind of slanted off the rest of it, like it's been bashed sideways. And what IS that big black thing in the corner? A parent? A swimming pool floatie? (Though I can't imagine what that would be doing in her room...) | |
Almost Jo writes: |
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jakian needs 2 get some eyes 
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Jakian writes: |
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Okay. Here’s the thing. Your art is good and all, but the thing that annoys me about it is the fact that it lacks some realistic elements that should be incorporated in the manga style. Such as the way that the hair is coming from the ponytails. The only way possible for the hair to be like that is to have allotted of gel. Hair sticks up like that usually because of the height of the bands that connect the hair. I also don’t like the fact that there is no real defined light source in the image. You can kind of tell, but it isn’t obvious enough to be notable. The eyes are also a tad bit cross eyed, which makes me kind of...taken away from the image. The colors seem a bit nauseating to the eye and the fact that there are not real textures in the image, doesn’t help the fact. Try thinking about the way that light actually hits materials and how different objects can take up different amounts of light and such. The anatomy seems very well done, but I feel that the top of the head should be a bit larger and rounder. Now, it looks like the head is a bit too flat. You seemed to have exaggerated some features. Which is okay, but the position on the nipple seems a tad off. Overall I think that its good work. The only thing that id say is try not to use an over abundance of pink and purple. | |
C.J. the snow trooper writes: |
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This is basicaly the best that I have ever seen of Niki.I like this picture all to well. 
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Archie Hohnen writes: |
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man it is really really good! ,nikki is my absolute fav!, definatly better then "nikki: what a ditz" but one thing i have to ask who or what  is the big blak thing in the corner of the pic?? | |
The Insane Reader writes: |
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Nice pink-and-purple usage in this pic. Nikki's breasts still look funny - like water balloons. The line art's a little sketchy. Nice outfit - purple-pink is such a pretty color, ne? And I don't think you're a perv, compared to a whole lot of other stuff I've seen on the web... | |
max writes: |
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your really good i mean really really good | |
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