Inking really enhanced this pic. There are a minor inking faults however, but no one has really mentioned them I really hate inking, 'coz you need to keep a steady hand and have smooth paper. I had to ink onto cartridge paper as I was all out of bristol board!

I like the action/speed lines on page two's top pannel drawing. It really does help emphasise the ball opening. I could have drawn BGs, but I didn't have time plus I don't think it would have made it look any better. In manga action scenes speed lines is a good replacement and help focus the eye on the 'action'.