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Tri_kento
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posted 16-02-2007 06:15 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hello friends. uhm long long long time since i've posted a drawing, i haven't made much effort to improve over the year. None the less, I thought i'd share with you guys my "Work in progress" i plan to redue this sketch agian, but am pleased with the stance i got him in, I just need to rework my clouthing folds, the guitar could use alot more detail. uhm lot's more on everything, and re work ratios to. so yea feel free to give some critz! am always open eared to advice.

[ 16-02-2007: Message edited by: Tri_kento ]

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posted 15-03-2007 08:24 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! YOU SUCK!! naw, just glad i can finally get to see one of you're works. IF anyone still goes here...

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Tri_kento
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posted 20-03-2007 07:08 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
overall from the knees down is where i got pissed of with my drawing. Other small ratio problems but am getting better then when i first started so it's a+ for me.

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posted 22-03-2007 09:21 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i'm kidding, you're pose is great.

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Zankouken
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posted 05-04-2007 08:46 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I like the stance aswell Tri, its a bit blurred but the hands look good to.
My only crits are that his right shoulder (our left) seems way to low and its making his arm look realy short, the guitar's neck seems a bit short aswell.

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Tri_kento
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posted 08-04-2007 07:21 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks Zankouken, uhm for the shoulder, i was trying to get the look of depth, like he was deeply going into a solo, thus why his head is down and he's hunched,(thus shoulder looks..blehish). but yea it is a little to low as well.

In a couple of weeks i plan to post a update, this time i'll scan it tho.

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Yuki H.
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posted 22-04-2007 04:11 AM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Add more 'weight' to it, the fella looks like he's floating a little..
The hand that's playing the guitar, maybe bend the arm a bit..
It's a good pose...

Nice to see that you've been drawing, and dude bomu changed his mind about deleting the board?!

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Tri_kento
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posted 28-04-2007 07:34 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Wow, Yuki haven't seen/heard you on OM for quite some time. Yea my guitar man could use alot of work, but am very with the way it turned out. At the moment am about half way through a revamp of him, i'll might toss a stage on there to, just to ground him a bit

Later mates!

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posted 04-07-2007 06:18 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i still want to see ur FULL power!

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Tri_kento
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posted 04-07-2007 07:45 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ha! well it'll have to wait, am now overloaded with work, and...other things . So yes, uhmmm I'll dust of my scanner and toss some other stuff on later.

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posted 25-05-2009 11:34 PM     Profile for Dekar   Email Dekar     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Nice Tri, I saw this when it was up it's tobad the image scan is quite shitastic.

It's a little late for any useful tips to benefit you now however I'll just say I like the overall what you went for or were trying to get down. All I see mostly is a burnt out musician that is leaning towards going emo/suicidal. Why I say this is because of the almost looped displacement as your eyes scroll down to his legs. It sort of looks like your looking at a rolled image like he is being wasted away to nothing sort of cool.

If it was intended to be a badass Punk Rocker or something more, more of an extreme stance in the figure would've been used so it's not so Vertical stagnant catching would've been in order.


Hey, do some more if you enjoyed doing it. Also, do you happen to play Guitar or any instrument cause it almost looks like he is playing a C Chord.

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