Manga page (rough)

This was supposed to be a final rough, but if they all take me as long at this one, we're all in for a long wait! I'm guessing it's about page 6 in the comic, I just thought it would be cool to illustrate a scene from my poorly written script *lol* The middle pannels are confussing I know, I guess that's something I'll have to get ironed out for the final. But it was ok for my first ever attempt at a comic book page.
-Date completed: Mar 26th '00. Materials used: 2H, HBpencil, 01 - 03 fine line pens